Log #1 3/22/11

On Tuesday we started class by reading an introduction of  a paper written by Mr. McArdle during his freshman year. The discussed the introduction by pointing out the main points, thesis and purpose of the paper. It was a really long introduction, but a lot better than anything I ever wrote my freshmen year. After that we got into our intensive review groups and discussed everyone's papers. I got a lot of good ideas and suggestions on how to fix my paper so it was definitely helpful. Thursday we are reviewing papers so everyone make sure they get those done!